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image A MOMENT PAST MIDNIGHT
BY JAYNE BENTLEY, 1979
CATEGORY ROMANCE
MACFADDEN ROMANCE #192
Currently out of print

Reviewed by: Carole Coonrod

Take two sisters, their grandfather's will and a man to whom their grandfather owed a debt from the past and you have the beginnings of a story of inheritance by marriage.

The story opens with Anne and Laura Grenville, and the hero, Ryder Marshall, sitting in the lawyers office after the reading of Anne and Laura's grandfather's will. The terms of the will stipulate that, in order to inherit, Ryder must marry one of the sisters for 6 months and live at his orange grove farm. Anne, not being as obviously beautiful nor as shallow as her sister, is not surprised when Ryder and Laura announce that they'll be fulfilling the terms of the will.

Within a few days, the three of them head out to the orange grove, where Ryder makes it clear that he intends to live there, rather than spend his time at his casino. Laura pitches a fit and leaves, fully expecting Ryder to come after her, because, after all, of course he has no option. He must marry one of the sisters, and when he can have Laura, why should he look twice at Anne (nice, isn't she)?

Well, is Laura out to be surprised! Anne is attracted to Ryder and offers to take Laura's place in a platonic marriage. Ryder, unbeknownst (love that word!) to Anne, is falling in love with her, so her offer is exactly what he wants….except for the platonic part. Oh, well, he figures he can wear her down and get around that platonic nonsense.

Naturally, these two aren't sharing their personal affectionate feelings with one another. This leads to attempts to make each other jealous (which work, much to their dismay).

I won't tell you anymore because we aren't supposed to tell the whole story, got it?

These characters are the kind we like. Although the hero is a little more macho than current day norms, he is still very likable and Anne is pretty independent. Honor, trust and truth play a big part in the hero and heroine's approach to life, as is the case with all of Jayne's main characters - wouldn't have it any other way. One last comment, I would like to thank the heroine for dumping the contents of the vase, filled with the roses and water, all over Laura's evening gown - she deserved that and a whole lot more, the total creeper!

Read the book if you can get your hands on it. It's fun.

Carole Coonrod


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